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This Entry Contains JUSTICE (Part V)

Posted February 19th, 2009 at 4:00 PM by Alter Ego

((Continued from Part IV. Character limit; we're just not meeting each other's needs. I think we need to see other people.))

Alter Ego says:
*grit teeth*
Hobo Luke says:
Here we have

A picture

Of the defendant and her boyfriend
Alter Ego says:
Pretty Defendant says:
Exboyfriend sir
Hobo Luke says:
Oh sorry dear

The Defendent and her exboyfriend

If one looks closely

You will see

And look
Alter Ego says:
Hobo Luke says:
A blinding reflection almost ruined the picture

And from what was the reflection caused by

the Necklace

Which makes it appear that his chest is glowing
Alter Ego says:
*grit teeth and sweating*


*Grasp's head*

*slams hand into table*

that changes nothing, Mr.Hobo

*smug smile*
The fact remains that the defendant is highly poetic and imaginative in writing out her 'diary'

it is impossible to deduce which parts of her diary are solid fact and which are fanciful interpretations


we have already established that the defendant has a HISTORY OF PSYCHOLOGICAL DISORDERS

Hobo Luke says:

Psychological Disorders

That brings me to the next part of my case

When my suspicion of you grew, I looked into your public records

As a public servant

Your medical records are open for everyone to view

But since you're not a politician

No one has really looked into your history

Until now
Alter Ego says:
*grit teeth*

This is still nothing but wild speculation
Hobo Luke says:
Alter Ego


skipped five grades within two years

Shows violent tendencies

Apparent psychopath

Age 7: Stabbed classmate in the arm with scissors
Alter Ego says:


...this is IRRELEVANT!

*slams fist into table*
Hobo Luke says:
Age: 9: Gave teacher apple containing poison. Claimed it was an accident and wasn't his fault. Excused. Needs to be watched

Age: 13: Picked up chair and smashed classmate over head for disagreeing with him in class
Alter Ego says:
*folds arms and scowls*

This is nothing but slander
Hobo Luke says:
Age: 14: Stabbed school nurse with pen when she tried to administer shot

Age: 16: History teacher dies of poisoning.

Only evidence... was a perfume bottle laced with poison

Apparently given to her by student some said was Alter

No proof could be given to place him as the one who give it to her

Alter moved a month later after being cleared
Alter Ego says:
So in fact, what you are citing

is lose speculations

with no *evidence* to back them up?
Hobo Luke says:
Age: 19: Professor poisoned at university

Again, only evidence that could be lifted was a cologne bottle laced with the poison
Alter Ego says:
*tosses head back*

Are you quite finished, Mr.Hobo?
Hobo Luke says:
Age: 20: Leaves school and enters mental facility

While in the hospital, seven fellow hospital mates die of poisoning

Why is it

That everywhere you go

People are being poisoned Mr. Prosecutor
Alter Ego says:
*tosses head back*

Why, praytell

should that matter?

Do you truly believe that a *genius* would leave such an easily followed signature?

Especially one who has studied THE LAW?

*arrogant head toss*
Hobo Luke says:

I wondered that too

And then I checked another aspect of your public record: your portfolio of papers from university

And do you recall the subject of your final paper?
Alter Ego says:
*grit teeth*
Hobo Luke says:
"Why Serial Killers Want to be Caught: The Story Behind Signatures, Evidence, and Guilt!"

((Continued in Part VI: has the prosecution unknowingly granted the defense a last chance? Stay tuned and find out.))
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  1. Old Comment
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    ...this is better than some soap operas in TV lately XD
    Posted February 20th, 2009 at 6:06 AM by Ivysaur Ivysaur is offline
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    Kinda reminds me of PW. :3
    Posted July 26th, 2009 at 10:02 AM by Vrai Vrai is offline
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    Whenever I'm sad, I come back and read this. :)
    Posted July 31st, 2009 at 9:24 PM by mystletainn mystletainn is offline

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