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Plot for some hack in the future. :)

Ace Trainer Slash

If you give me about two hours, I can make scripts
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Hello. :)

On one of the recent blogs I've made, I had decided to show a tidbit of information about a script I'd put in for a future hack of mine. (which now I've read it again, sounds really edgy, I'm probably going to change something with it, not sure what though.)

And so, at this point in time, I've created a base story for this future hack, specifically how it involves the protagonists parents. This is just a basic summary of the parent's roles are in the hack, as well as a bit of the antagonists personality, and I was wondering whether it sounds like something people would be interested in actually playing through. I'll leave a brief summary, as well as some basic dialogue that would lead towards a battle against the antagonist. I'll leave what I wrote in a spoiler for people that don't want to see a clump of information. It's also kinda PG, so. :D

Spoiler:


Ok, so the summary. Your mother and father play as goals for the protagonist in the future, specifically, why your mother had been killed by your father, why your father had left you, and why he stole her prized bracelet. The plot to give a personal connection to the antagonist, would be the antagonist would have an ex-wife, who would be the protagonist's mother.

The antagonist threatened to kill the protagonist if the protagonist's father didn't kill his wife, your father ends up killing your mother to save your life. Later on, since the antagonist has created a scenario that the protagonist would dislike, he asks whether they'd like to join his business. The father steps in and takes the job instead to establish a relationship between the father and son further. During the middle of the hack, the protagonist would stumble upon a secret base, with his father suffering from immense lust for food and other pleasures, the antagonist watching the entire scene unfold between both the father and offspring.

The antagonist would lead the father to a chamber, with a piece of food in the middle, and a Pokemon in the same spot. The Pokemon mauls the father to death, as a literal reference to how lust and greed can destroy a person.

I just wanted to know whether this is a good start to a plot, and whether it would be a good decision to add this as a part of the story for an initially dark hack, or change the plot so far entirely. :)

Thanks in advance. :D
 
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