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Shine Diamond episode 52--The Afterpost

Posted 13 Hours Ago at 12:09 PM by EmeraldSky
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This week, Ash takes on Maylene, battles to a draw, and then ends up completing his team in the process!

One big change was taking out Team Rocket, as per the competition rule (that, and Team Galactic has a major role next week, so it wouldn't make sense for them to show up here) This was also another good spot for Dawn to cheer Ash by singing "Glory in our Story" again, which is a call back to his battle with Roark earlier.

Maylene actually says her in game intro...
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Shine Diamond episode 51b--The Afterpost

Posted 3 Days Ago at 9:13 AM by EmeraldSky

This week, Dawn manages to inspire Maylene to fight again even though she loses the battle.

The biggest change was reshuffling Dawn's team to account for the remixed teams. The evil team was also removed, as I have a very specific place I want Team Galactic to appear.

Ash telling Dawn about the moves Maylene and her team used and how they work in Contests was new for the story. I wanted to reinforce that Dawn is still focusing on Contests, so I thought this would be...
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Part 2 of Episode 51 delayed

Posted 1 Week Ago at 7:50 AM by EmeraldSky

Part 2 of Episode 51 is delayed due to one of the places I post the story being down for maintenance.

I don't know when the board will be back up, but I hope to have the next episode posted Wednesday.
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Shine Diamond episode 51a--The Afterpost

Posted 1 Week Ago at 10:02 AM by EmeraldSky

This week, after reflecting on her impending match with the boys, Dawn's first battle gets underway!

I moved Ash's training scene with Estrella (and Dawn's training) into an interlude because the episode would run long if I included that, the heart-to-heart (which I expanded on), and the battle itself.

I cut out the cutaway with Maylene's training because I felt Dawn's preparation (and Ash's training) took priority.

Maylene's Meditite Kuto is short for...
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Shine Diamond episode 50b--The Afterpost

Posted 2 Weeks Ago at 10:09 AM by EmeraldSky
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This week, Dawn and Maylene have a heart to heart, while Ash learns that Diddy can Mega Evolve!

The biggest change for this episode was taking out the battle between Ash and Reggie. I felt it looked out of place in what I felt was an intimate episode, so I cut it, and then expanded on the girls' heart to heart and the boy's visit with Reggie.

Another big change was adding in Mega Shinou starters, who are new for the story. Since Paul still has a Chimchar in the remix,...
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