Shine Diamond episode 84b--The Afterpost
Posted November 2nd, 2019 at 8:33 AM by EmeraldSky
This week, the Phione finds the group and Lola, where it challenges Lola to battle!
The Phione looking for Lola and the group allowed me to do a little worldbuilding of Chocovine Town and actually detail the gang coord shopping for Dawn (she will wear the coord she chose next time, in the contest itself)
Team Rocket was cut and replaced with a gang of delinquents, which still allowed the episode to work. Even then, I dialed back the role they played because I wanted the episode to focus on the Phione and Lola.
I sped up the battle between the Phione and Lola to help the story flow better.
Next time, Dawn faces off against a vengeful rival in the Chocovine Contest!
The Phione looking for Lola and the group allowed me to do a little worldbuilding of Chocovine Town and actually detail the gang coord shopping for Dawn (she will wear the coord she chose next time, in the contest itself)
Team Rocket was cut and replaced with a gang of delinquents, which still allowed the episode to work. Even then, I dialed back the role they played because I wanted the episode to focus on the Phione and Lola.
I sped up the battle between the Phione and Lola to help the story flow better.
Next time, Dawn faces off against a vengeful rival in the Chocovine Contest!
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