Conversation Between PastelPhoenix and L'Belle
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  1. L'Belle
    January 14th, 2018 12:34 PM
    I took care of these points, please let me know if something is wrong.
  2. L'Belle
    January 12th, 2018 12:58 AM
    Thank you for replying, I will certainly look into these points.
  3. PastelPhoenix
    January 11th, 2018 3:14 PM
    I think some areas that could use a little improvement would be:

    Maybe give an example of his eccentricities, especially the spoken one. Eccentric covers a lot.

    Having a picture is good, but I forgot to mention the need to still describe the appearance. Even little stuff helps.

    I think his history could probably use another event or two. It feels kind of barebones and glossed over. Some stuff that might help is maybe detail one of the bully moments (like the worst one that made him reclusive, or one of the ways his parents have tried to help him be social. It just adds a lot to build off of as a GM, and ways to connect as a player.
  4. L'Belle
    January 11th, 2018 5:38 AM
    Hi, could you give some feedback on my SU?
  5. PastelPhoenix
    January 10th, 2018 12:54 PM
    I actually already had it submitted, it was just awaiting approval until today. But if you have any ideas related to plot/events/places etc. i am always happy to work with people to incorporate their ideas. Very glad people are excited about this.
  6. L'Belle
    January 9th, 2018 5:46 AM
    Hi, so I saw you were making a persona rp. Any idea when you think you'll get it done, and do you need any help with it? Sorry if I sound rude, but i'm just so excited :D