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Conversation Between BronzeSwagger and Pia Carrot


Conversation Between BronzeSwagger and Pia Carrot
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  1. BronzeSwagger
    October 15th, 2017 7:19 AM
    BronzeSwagger
    That actually works then, it'd mean I spent a whole night on nothing. But I appreciate it though. That's actually a better way of going about it compared to mine I think. Mine would look alright if it wasn't limited to 2 colors not counting black & white. I'd of appreciated 5 colors on the gbc anyday of the week for this one.
  2. Pia Carrot
    October 15th, 2017 4:35 AM
    Pia Carrot
    Hydreigon is a difficult Pokemon to devamp. Not sure even I would attempt it. Anyway, I have a pretty decent devamp on my hard drive, by Thor.

    https://imgur.com/a/3pXJ3
  3. BronzeSwagger
    October 15th, 2017 2:32 AM
    BronzeSwagger
    If this was "who wants to be a millionaire", then I need to use a lifeline atm.
    I'm not gonna lie...I spent all night just working on ONE devamp, and it has me crunching on tears. I'm exhausted and its not done yet. I was hoping you could give my Hydreigon a touch-up either in the technical areas, or for the least part shading as I honestly can't think of what else to do here. I'm for the most part brain-dead.
    I'll make sure to give extra on my deviantart and my hack I'm using this on. Its free to use as well.
  4. BronzeSwagger
    October 9th, 2017 7:12 AM
    BronzeSwagger


    https://bronzeswagger.deviantart.com/art/Yoko-GSC-Sprite-WIP-708848335

    I included a url to my new deviantart page in case you want to stop by or the img tag doesn't work, but how do you feel about it now? I've been taking everything into consideration on this sprite and I feel better than I did before. Idk if this is the final version yet though, I feel like I'm missing her normal eye color, but Idk how to implement it at all without it looking "bleh"
  5. Pia Carrot
    October 9th, 2017 3:29 AM
    Pia Carrot
    Much better. Could also try to round out the hair a bit more, the top left and right bits look a bit jagged. Aside from that its pretty good.
  6. BronzeSwagger
    October 8th, 2017 10:37 AM
    BronzeSwagger


    How's this look?
  7. Pia Carrot
    October 8th, 2017 7:39 AM
    Pia Carrot
    Hey, that's pretty good. Only thing i can say is the face looks very plain, no eyebrows or anything to help it out. Could help to make the head a bit bigger in that sense.
  8. BronzeSwagger
    October 7th, 2017 11:50 PM
    BronzeSwagger


    I finally finished one I was a little bit comforatble with, but was not certain it was the best and could use some critque and help with improving. Maybe show me what I did wrong?
  9. BronzeSwagger
    October 7th, 2017 4:16 PM
    BronzeSwagger
    I was hoping to ask for some Spriting tips?
    I'm wanting to use a character named Yoko Littner and was particularly wanting to use this pose, but I have no idea where to start and exactly which colors to use for it other than black & red.
    Its for GSC format purposes obviously, but that's what's making it so difficult for me to try and process how to work on it. I've been spriting nearly all day today, 5-6 hours just on this, and I've had to scrap my own progress each time and start over from the beginning. The other part of this is, is I was actually NOT going to include her weapon and have her in black jeans instead. So its mainly the top half I've been trying to get help with.

    https://pre00.deviantart.net/0f3f/th/pre/i/2016/286/b/f/yoko_littner__tengen_toppa_gurren_lagann_by_naironkr-daku4wf.png
  10. BronzeSwagger
    June 26th, 2017 9:28 AM
    BronzeSwagger
    I'll try my best then, thank you for the input!
  11. Pia Carrot
    June 25th, 2017 7:40 AM
    Pia Carrot


    As for the sheet, most of them look fine to me aside from Silver, Misty and Chuck (who are squished). Janine is looking a little swole and her head needs a bit of deflating. Aside from those, a lot of the sprite have very weak palettes like Jasmine, Whitney, Falkner, and Blue. Try making their palettes a bit darker and it should help. Also, Lance seems to be too dark and heavily dithered.
  12. BronzeSwagger
    June 24th, 2017 8:20 AM
    BronzeSwagger
    I had to remove the Trainer Sprite sheet image earlier, but I'll reupload it without the Lorelei Sprite so there's no confusion.

  13. Pia Carrot
    June 24th, 2017 8:10 AM
    Pia Carrot
    sure thing, when i have some time later today ill see what i can do
  14. BronzeSwagger
    June 23rd, 2017 7:35 AM
    BronzeSwagger
    Hello Pia, I was hoping we could chat for minute or two. :)

    https://hax.iimarckus.org/topic/197/20/

    Whenever you have time, I would appreciate my Sprites looked at, Rangi recommended me to you as well.

    As I've been told, some of my trainer sprites are a bit proportionally off, I can also use some better skills at shading.

    While you're looking at those though, there is a custom heroine sprite on my trainer sheet, on there is my version of her before I asked Rangi, and she came up with this other, which I think looks better than mine in a nutshell, but also wanted to see if you'd go about her any different than either me or Rangi. No disrespect to anyone of course.

    Rangi's version:
    My Original:

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