Conversation Between forg and Sweet Serenity
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  1. Sweet Serenity
    February 4th, 2023 11:07 AM
    Sweet Serenity
    You're such a sweetheart. ^__^

    Hopefully this can serve as more inspiration for you: your poems have a creative rhythm in their structure with clever wordplay and simultaneously sound conversational as well. "Bittersweet Snapshots of Life," more specifically "Dancing Hearts" sounded like it was speaking to me, no different to a regular conversation, while also utilizing clever wordplay that ignites vigor in my psyche. Reading it gives me a feeling of personal inspiration and motivation, something that I seek constantly. The highlight of "Wind Witch" is definitely the rhythm and structure, as well as the metaphors. I was able to gather many things from it, namely that it is important for us to find a way to cool off when things get heated in life and when we're feeling under the weather, using actual wind as a metaphor. I enjoy it, girl, I really do enjoy it a lot. ^__^ "Obsession" seemed like the conclusion to the other poems from how I read, as in you finally reaped the benefits of finding peace through the chaos. You really do have a way with words and I really love it. I am definitely looking forward to you sharing more with us.
  2. forg
    January 28th, 2023 5:31 AM
    No problemo! And ah, nah nah ahahaha, thanks for reading my poems. I appreciate the compliment and it gives me motivation to continue! I admit. The way I work is that I usually wait for inspiration or a moment of time where I have this huge urge to write poems. I had that moment and wrote a bunch of poems. Then stopped. Just waiting for more moments of inspiration ~

    I like your poems too! I still recall the pyramid-theme you made <3

    Ah yes! I love cold weather for the reason you described: snuggling up, hot cocoa, heater on- aaaa yeeeees.
  3. Sweet Serenity
    January 25th, 2023 10:36 AM
    Sweet Serenity
    Thanks a lot for the birthday wish, forg! I appreciate it a lot! I definitely look forward to more of your poems as well. They're really well written. As for January, I guess you can say it's a cool month, quite literally too. Lol It's a good month to turn the heat on, snuggle up, and relax!
  4. forg
    January 25th, 2023 6:06 AM
    Heya! While late, Happy Birthday!!! I’m glad you celebrated it here amongst kind, like-minded individuals! ^ -^ ~

    Not to mention January is a cool month, so you’re automatically cool in my books (: Our birthdays are not that far apart so I admit, while perhaps cringy at best, I feel a teenie bit of happiness knowing that fact.