Hey so I guess you have to delete the post for it to go away. BUT I saved you advice on my computer so I always have it. If you could delete it that would be neat, sorry if I kinda sound anal about this; I am just that....anal.
But again thank you for the feed back and I hope to hear more from you. Enjoy the story! Have a great day!
OMG thank you so much fort the comment, I really do appreciate it. I do know that my grammar is lacking; I am still working on it, every time I read over it I find another error. But thank you I will go back and fix it the best I can.
I am glad you like the humor and the puns, I really tried hard to balance the romance and comedy in the story. I am glad you like it, and anytime you see something just PM me and I will go fix it right away.
Thanks again, I hope you enjoy how it goes reading further. But I hope you don't mind if I delete your post so my story flows...I don't want to offend anyone, let me know if you mind or not. if you want me to leave it I can.