Showing Visitor Messages 1 to 13 of 13
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June 6th, 2009 4:25 PMMonochromeyou need to post by monday night or you will be kicked
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June 2nd, 2009 9:22 AMMonochromeSure... Btw first chapters up...
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June 2nd, 2009 6:28 AMMurdersince we haven't started could I switch my pokemon to a shiny seedot?
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May 28th, 2009 6:38 AMMonochromeWow very creative
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May 28th, 2009 6:14 AMMurder:>. I have the pass, read carefully. I think my most interesting section is the pokemon section.
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May 28th, 2009 6:00 AMMurderYup, never once did think you were being rude/a "hardass." Everyone has their rules and regulations that they want followed.
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May 28th, 2009 5:55 AMMonochromeAlright thanks... I dont want to be a hardass or anything just making sure everyone has an equal chance yknow?
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May 28th, 2009 5:41 AMMurderOk, I changed it up a bit, hope that is better.
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May 28th, 2009 5:39 AMMurderI wasn't angry, in fact I am not angry. Oh, and I did reread, however, not the skeleton. :<. I also do not see why I should put that he is cocky beforehand. It wouldn't make a difference. But, I'll see what I can do.
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May 28th, 2009 5:31 AMMonochromeWell if you took the time to reread your post you'd see you literally wrote history twice and in one of your historys you wrote the same thing that was in your personality, AND what I was saying was you should mention hes cocky and admant BEFORE you say "Azul is little lighthearted, and isn't serious all the time" Because that implies youve already stated hes serious frequently... I'm just trying to help you out here so relax....
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May 27th, 2009 8:47 PMMurderLighthearted (adj.)- 1.Free from worry, anxiety, or seriousness
2. Cheerfully optimistic and hopeful
Cocky (adj.)1. Boldly or brashly self-confident
2.Jauntily
As you can see, being cocky doesn't necessarily mean that said person is a Jerk. And being lighthearted has nothing in the way of his kindness to people. You forced a correlation that was otherwise non-existant.
I also wrote one history, if your read closely, he started in HOENN and was sent of to Inveno. I also fail to see where I have repeated my self --in either my personality or history.
So, if you would be so kind as to possibly point an area out where it is as such, then I will wholeheartedly fix it. -
May 27th, 2009 7:08 PMMonochromeYou sort of restate yourself multiple times and your personality is in your history.. and you wrote two historys.. also umm... dud you started with but sometimes hes light hearted and then said hes a cocky jerk.... it should go backwards normally right?
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May 27th, 2009 6:45 PMMurderCould you define "Choppy"


