Conversation Between star88 and Blue Angel
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  1. star88
    December 2nd, 2008 8:11 AM
    star88
    um by the 6th because it is a long chapter:) i can make the deadline sooner if you want though:P
  2. Blue Angel
    November 30th, 2008 10:50 AM
    Blue Angel
    I seem to be moving farther away from this place by the minute ;p
    Can you give me a deadline in which to proofread your message? Might get the ball rolling :p Can't promise, but at least it'll give me a force to read so I can get it done for ya. ^^
  3. star88
    November 27th, 2008 8:53 AM
    star88
    ok i will pm it you along with chapter 3 [ i have just finished it]
  4. Blue Angel
    November 26th, 2008 9:13 PM
    Blue Angel
    Sure, if you want me to proofread it for ya ^^
    It is 100% fine with me :)
  5. star88
    November 26th, 2008 12:32 PM
    star88
    hi i know i have done it completely out of sequence but i have finished the epilouge. shall i pm it you to check?
  6. star88
    November 12th, 2008 11:46 AM
    star88
    oh i have got several inter storys in my head word for word i just need to put them down on paper. what i meant was the very end [ well the part were someone dies] i keeps playing over and over in my head. [i see everything i type or right before me as though i am a computer in a way. and i see storys as films in my head if that makes sence.]
  7. Blue Angel
    November 11th, 2008 11:56 AM
    Blue Angel
    Lol ^^
    Do you mean the end to the chapter or to the story?
    You can do both/either. Just save it to a Word document(or something similar) and refer to it later. If it is the very end, you can always refer to it at the end, and see if your intentions for the ending have changed.

    It's best to write what you got flowing. Good Luck ^^
  8. star88
    November 11th, 2008 7:41 AM
    star88
    nearly finish the next chapter will get it to you asap:) [ i keep trying to write the end by mistake]
  9. Blue Angel
    November 10th, 2008 8:16 PM
    Blue Angel
    Do you have anymore of your story you want me to proofread?
    No pressure - I am just free tomorrow, and open for proofreading.
  10. Blue Angel
    November 4th, 2008 4:39 PM
    Blue Angel
    By tomorrow? Sure. I'll do my best to overcome homework, so I can read.
  11. star88
    November 4th, 2008 11:07 AM
    star88
    well when i send it you i would like it checked and back for the next day:) [ is that a good deadline]
  12. Blue Angel
    November 3rd, 2008 4:13 PM
    Blue Angel
    Give me some sort of deadline. I need some "push" because I am prone to procrastination. Mostly it's because I have homework,etc. and I need someone to give that little push in order to do something.
  13. star88
    November 3rd, 2008 7:13 AM
    star88
    it is ok thankyou for giving it. astinus says you will check my other chapter before it goes out:) so thankyou for offering to help
  14. Blue Angel
    November 2nd, 2008 8:26 AM
    Blue Angel
    It looks much better with the line there and no bolding.
    I like the look much better now. Somehow it looks like it has more calm and flow.
    Thanks for taking the advice ^^
  15. Blue Angel
    November 2nd, 2008 8:15 AM
    Blue Angel
    It's just cause bolding is one of those things that makes it harder to read. I think it's a rule. I don't think it's that big of a deal, but the better the presentation, the better the first impression ^^