I thought that it would've flowed alright as long as you took off the last sentence or two. Her post was about you talking in the camp, while yours seemed more like a character development (guilt trip) for your character and was a transition between the two.
But it's your post *shrugs*
And sorry for bunnying your character so much in my posts. You can do the same to mine in your posts :)
Because Mira posted hers at a very similar time, and they kinda contradicted each other, and wouldn't make sense if they were both there. So I thought hers was better and so got rid of mine.
Thanks, and you can make my Character talk and stuff in your reply. It's OK with me. Just tell me what your post is going to be about or send me it before you post :)
Really good post in the Uprising Thread, Very long and descriptive. In my reply, can I bunny your character, not speaking, just facial expressions and basically laughing.