Well, it would look nicer if you separated the paragraphs properly, but the RP itself looks fine, so I have no bigger problems with it. It's the writing that counts, after all. ;3
Um... Alter Ego I submitted an RP thread and I had been working on it in word, so I was worried that some of the spaces might not be where they're suppose to be. I just wanted to tell you that in case the RP looks squished because I had typed in word first.
If it does end up with messed up spacing is there anything you want me to do about it?