Better... but there are still a few more problems. The accuracy and the depth. Coal Town is not a town in the Ophoore region and Mt. Inferno isn't as well. Also you failed to have your character arrive at the Bird Pokemon Sanctuary to fight the grunts. Finally the battle needs to still be a bit longer. I'm not trying to be mean or anything it's just that I have to have some standards and these rules apply to everybody.