Conversation Between Alter Ego and Monochrome
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  1. Monochrome
    August 15th, 2009 1:04 PM
    Monochrome
    Hey my internet has been completely bugging out on me lately... This is the first time it has worked correctly in days.... My post shall be up tonight

    Goddamnit... I'm falling behind in every RP and I have to drop one of them... I'm sorry Alter Ego I know I promised I would Sign Up but I cant keep up with all of them... My comp apparently has a virus that seems to be at bay for the moment but I need to drop out of this RP...... I apologize....
  2. Monochrome
    August 9th, 2009 7:04 PM
    Monochrome
    Edited it a bit, underlined the differences, tell me if it is an improvement...
  3. Monochrome
    August 8th, 2009 6:57 PM
    Monochrome
    K I have no work tomorrow at all, I'm tired as heck tonight... But tomorrow the edits will be in for sure, I did it at work but closed it without saving because I am an idiot.;;;
  4. Alter Ego
    August 8th, 2009 12:56 PM
    Alter Ego
    AHEM.

    Just as a reminder, hun? Sign-up deadlines for A Comedy of Circumstances are closing in, and I'm still waiting for those edits. I'd suggest directing your attention to that ASAP. It would be silly to fail so close to an accepted verdict. D:
  5. Monochrome
    August 5th, 2009 4:23 PM
    Monochrome
    I didn't want to get cut off before my corrections XD
  6. Alter Ego
    August 5th, 2009 7:36 AM
    Alter Ego
    Next Monday in que with my first post, as stated in the OOC thread. Why?
  7. Monochrome
    August 5th, 2009 6:36 AM
    Monochrome
    Err... when do the SUs close?
  8. Monochrome
    August 2nd, 2009 1:31 PM
    Monochrome
    Kay I will fix it tonight!
  9. Alter Ego
    August 2nd, 2009 1:10 PM
    Alter Ego
    Mmm...kind of figured. Thing is, though, the passage itself is reporting things in detail more reminiscent of someone writing a novel about this guy than a journal entry type thing. That aside, though, the narrative PoV is not a big concern...

    ...what I would like, though, is having that motive expressed a bit in the intro. It doesn't need to be a huge paragraph, but it's something that's clearly quite fundamental to his behavior, so I'd like to see it in there in some fashion, y'know? XD
  10. Monochrome
    August 2nd, 2009 10:44 AM
    Monochrome
    The only reason I wrote the Intro in the first person was because it was supposed to be like a journal by him that they pulled up... And he hates the government because they basically own him him and can make him do whatever they wish. He doesn't like being controlled... And I will expand on appearance without a problem.. I tried to write it so like it was a file they pulled up in a computer...
  11. Monochrome
    August 2nd, 2009 8:09 AM
    Monochrome
    Works for me, I should have my SU in a few
  12. Alter Ego
    August 2nd, 2009 7:47 AM
    Alter Ego
    Yes, the regions are all unified into one government. This government is also what the agents work for. Period. Their work is basically any kind of physical enforcement of government orders, including security duty, crowd control (breaking up riots etc.), apprehending criminals and the like. In the case of this particular RP startup, it's keeping people from killing each other at the summit.

    Long story short: government people make decisions. If there is danger of the physical kind involved with those decisions, agents are called in for backup.

    And nah, I'm not calling in any specific uniform. Agents already have their tattoos as identification. That being said, agents are tightly monitored 24/7 and don't get particularly much pay or free time, so they'd probably have to make do with government-provided clothing for the most part, which means mostly plain, utilitarian stuff.
  13. Monochrome
    August 1st, 2009 5:01 PM
    Monochrome
    I'm planning on creating an Agent... They don't have a uniform right? And also... The union is neutral right? like its a unified government... So like Agents work as the guys in the middle or something? Explain who exactly Agents are allied with and what they do plox...
  14. Alter Ego
    July 31st, 2009 10:28 PM
    Alter Ego
    Only two pieces, really:

    When in doubt: ask. I'm being vague about plenty of things with that plot to keep it from growing out of all proportion, so there will most likely be a thing or two you'll want more detail on. If/When you encounter something like that, feel free to ask about the specifics.

    Second, just take it easy. Signing up seems to have become such a hectic thing here, and that's not an air I want to have around my RP. Rushed profiles make for sloppy work, hence why I'm avoiding any prematurely final decisions, deadlines, quotas etc. at present.

    Also, not to worry. Even though most will get a verdict of pending at this point, I'm giving out feedback to anyone and everyone who posts a non-skeleton profile, so if there's anything I don't want in my RP or that I think is not up to scratch, I'm going to say as much. I'd rather decline just the bad bits instead of the whole thing, you know? XD
  15. Monochrome
    July 31st, 2009 10:18 PM
    Monochrome
    Works for me mi amiga, anything extra I should know about the RP before thinking about my Sign Up? Like any specific advice?