okay sorry ill like try again in a few monthes thanks for being so nice about it : ) oh by the way im bout to get exacuted got to leave the country XD see ya
After such a ridiculously short waiting period, I'm afraid there can be no lenience on this count. Your public execution has now been scheduled for the 21st of July, 13:00 EST. Don't be late now. ;D
Seriously speaking, please wait 24 hours before making complaints about this sort of thing, kay? Timezones do exist, and I'm not on here moderating every waking hour, but I do make a point of checking once a day.
That being said...your RP had some severe lackings. Grammar and spelling were pretty bad all around, it lacked any actual plot or setting (or indeed meaningful thing for RPers to do), and what little you had was confusing because of the aforementioned grammar and spelling errors.
Just...yeah, you've got a long way to go before this meets standards. :\