Conversation Between Misheard Whisper and Spectacular Hero
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  1. Spectacular Hero
    March 5th, 2009 2:06 PM
    Spectacular Hero
    I do put effort I practically kill myself it's not my fault PEOPLE think they can boss me around all the time, I'll take advices but not bossing if they think they can write a better story then let them write them...now I'm tire of this conversation so let's just say you won AGAIN
  2. Misheard Whisper
    March 5th, 2009 11:01 AM
    Misheard Whisper
    "They're", "their" and "there" were just examples. Yes, I know all fics have errors. What I'm saying is that yours have an awful lot, and you're making no apparent effort to correct them. I can't put it any blunter than that.
  3. Spectacular Hero
    March 5th, 2009 3:15 AM
    Spectacular Hero
    Since when are you this uptight and like I said most of the greatest fics here have some small eror and I know the difference between "Their" "They're" and "There"
  4. Misheard Whisper
    March 4th, 2009 10:04 PM
    Misheard Whisper
    Dude, you're not getting me. You don't write for yourself, you write for an audience, and you need to remember that! If your fic is unintelligible, people will just find something else. It's not just you. You post your story for other people's entertainment, and right now, it's not entertaining me, because I'm having to wade through an ocean of painfully awkward syntax to decipher each line before moving on.

    People want easy reads. Not easy, plot-wise (Readers love a good quagmire of a plot, with tons of twists and turns), but surface-wise. It's as simple as capitalising where capitalising is needed, putting periods where they should be, spelling common words right (spelling "unintelligible" as "unintelligable" is understandable, for instance, but getting "their", "they're" and "there" confused is not), and rereading your sentences so that they flow comfortably and smoothly. Don't forget that your whole story needs to flow nicely, too; all the bits and bobs need to interweave, join together and meld neatly into a work of art.

    Until you can show me you're trying to do this, you shall get no reviews from me.
  5. Spectacular Hero
    March 4th, 2009 7:30 PM
    Spectacular Hero
    DUDE what do you want me to do I'm just fourteen years old and I'm not a perfect writer man no one IS you're trying to get someone that's still learning that didn't even really care about grammare till six months ago to suck it up and write like a pro
  6. Misheard Whisper
    March 4th, 2009 7:27 PM
    Misheard Whisper
    Excuses. I swear, I'm not reviewing another fic if I can see ten mistakes just by glancing at it.
  7. Spectacular Hero
    March 4th, 2009 7:22 PM
    Spectacular Hero
    HEY, I resent that, I'm still freaking learning and not even the best writer its perfect it's not like I do them or purpose and it's not like if I use abbriviations or anything
  8. Misheard Whisper
    March 4th, 2009 7:21 PM
    Misheard Whisper
    I'll read a fic of yours when you can show me one with no horrible grammar errors.
  9. Spectacular Hero
    March 4th, 2009 3:55 PM
    Spectacular Hero
    so can you read it pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
  10. Spectacular Hero
    March 3rd, 2009 7:52 PM
    Spectacular Hero
    Yeah srry about the nerdy comment, guess I'm a little over my head right now. Anyways I posted my first fic here, it's not a Pokemon fic is based off this anime I've been reading called DNAngel basically what my avatar's based off point is you don't need to see the anime to read my fic so if you want just go to the other writing section in the forums and you'll find it.
  11. Misheard Whisper
    March 3rd, 2009 7:39 PM
    Misheard Whisper
    That sounds about right. And the reason I don't know that isn't because I'm nerdy. It's because in NZ, we use kilometres, which are a thousand metres each. Standard tracks are 400m around here, too, but meh.
  12. Spectacular Hero
    March 3rd, 2009 7:17 PM
    Spectacular Hero
    Man, you are a little nerdy but I was just like that a few months ago, anyway a mile is four laps each laps has four quarters each quarter is one hundred meters I think and each lap is a quarter of a mile
  13. Misheard Whisper
    March 3rd, 2009 7:15 PM
    Misheard Whisper
    Yeah but I don't know how long a lap is. I assume it's a quarter of a mile, but I still don't know how long that is comparitively.
  14. Spectacular Hero
    March 3rd, 2009 7:13 PM
    Spectacular Hero
    You really don't know miles, that's four laps which is a lot if you're just starting running it normally takes me two minutes to run one lap, but I did on lap in less than ninety seconds
  15. Misheard Whisper
    March 3rd, 2009 7:04 PM
    Misheard Whisper
    I don't know miles, but sounds OK.