Conversation Between Neutrino and Redstar
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  1. Redstar
    September 11th, 2009 2:29 PM
    I just thought it was fine. And poets generally always re-work words in that fashion. No big deal, really.
  2. Neutrino
    September 11th, 2009 9:27 AM
    Really? I thought it was tedious, with no obvious structure, and even the words had been changed to suit a pathetic poetical cause.
  3. Redstar
    September 10th, 2009 1:59 PM
    I find the rhyming quaint and adorable. Exactly as the writer intended, so there's no fault from my perspective.
  4. Neutrino
    September 10th, 2009 9:04 AM
    I can see where you would have gotten mixed up, but I was referring to rhymes because that particular poem was supposed to be a rhyming one. I don't know if you noticed, but if you say it out loud - as ridiculous as it sounds when you say it out loud - you do noticed some form of rhyme.

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