Conversation Between dream's-epilogue and Lucent
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  1. Lucent
    March 23rd, 2009 4:22 PM
    Lucent
    A bit too long for my liking, but other than that, it's actually not that bad ><'
  2. dream's-epilogue
    March 22nd, 2009 1:14 PM
    dream's-epilogue
    I got the rist chapter of LDA posted. Check it out and tell me what you think, and how I can improve for the next one, please!
  3. Lucent
    March 14th, 2009 5:05 PM
    Lucent
    Hmm... Well, first off, you wouldn't use something like "*sniffle*". You would say "Ikiji sniffled." and then follow it up with him speaking. But that's just me.

    Actually, I don't see anything wrong with it. Maybe the person's title was just more catchy than yours? Just because it has more views doesn't mean its more popular ;D
  4. dream's-epilogue
    March 14th, 2009 1:13 PM
    dream's-epilogue
    Yeah, I like all three versions, but Pikachu is my fave...

    I'm kinda depressed though. I want to put Ikiji's (a character of mine) story on here, but I put this prologue up, and I've only got 47 views, compared to a guy who posted the day after me and already has over 100...

    I like Ikiji's tale because it combines all three Chu's in a single plot (Ikiji's companion, Matsuko, starts as a Pichu and evolves over the course of the story.) It's different from other trainer stories, but Ijust wish it hadn't flopped so bad... hey...

    If it's not too much trouble, could you read it and tell me what I might've done wrong? Please?
  5. Lucent
    March 14th, 2009 7:44 AM
    Lucent
    Well, hi to you back =D And you don't seem like a bad person either... XD

    I actually like Pichu a lot more than Pikachu, but only because it's cuter XD Still, both are pretty awesome ^^
  6. dream's-epilogue
    March 12th, 2009 5:16 PM
    dream's-epilogue
    Just felt like saying hi...you don't seem like a bad person...and any Pikachu fan can't be all bad!