Conversation Between dream's-epilogue and delongbi
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  1. delongbi
    April 15th, 2009 8:40 PM
    delongbi
    Sorry about this, but I'm too tired and don't have time to do a true review right now, so I'm just going to post this hear. I thought the chapter was interesting, but repetative. We get that his Pokemon will be with him to the end the first time you mention it. Also, sometimes I felt you were trying too hard to set the reminiscing tone... again, less repetition would help. Sorry I didn't go more detailed; if I have time I will. Nice new avatar, btw.
  2. delongbi
    March 31st, 2009 8:25 PM
    delongbi
    I didn't want to post this review in the thread because it was too short.

    I thought the chapter was a bit short, but had good character development. Can't wait for more!
  3. delongbi
    March 26th, 2009 10:11 PM
    delongbi
    The dream is intended to be bizzare...it gets a lot stranger later on...it starts to cause problems for Ikiji (and later Matsuko begins "sharing" the dream with him, and some of the things they experience cause them to question their sanity...)
    Yay can't wait! (sorry, I moved here because these comments are not directly related to the story)

    Also, just out of curiousity, where does this whole thing take place?