thanks for your 'advice' and i dont hate you. the truth hurts. yeah, this is my first time RPing so i mite post a bit bad but thanks, i have since revised and am writing a new piece for my last post. also i was drunk when i posted it so i dont remember posting it, it was just there this morning. thanks,
I'm not trying to be mean and you can hate me if you want. I only speak the truth here. you RPing sucks. it's too rushed, there's too little detail. If you could make your posts more detailed, drawn out and much less rushed (spend a good 30 minutes to 45 minuts writing your post) and it'll be much better.
Just constructive criticism from the gothic car-nut.