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July 24th, 2009 7:49 PMLashI'll probably have it sent to you before the night ends, but I'll have to tell you something before hand: It was running too long, 9000 words plus, so I had to divide Chapter 4 into two halves. I thought it would be better than just seeing an onslaught of thousands of words :3
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July 24th, 2009 2:48 PMIbuberuDamnit, I love to read everything!
Hmm, I could get it done if you sent it to me by today/tomorrow in your case :3 But no promises, unfortunately D: I'll do my best though. -
July 24th, 2009 4:30 AMLashWell, the chapter still has a couple hundred words to go before I finish, so would Saturday/Sunday be alright for you to beta?
I'm probably saying to much, but inside Dark Cave, I put a Maro-Cubo family: Three baby Cubone's, one mother Marowak <33333
I know you will love to read that part :3 -
July 24th, 2009 1:01 AMIbuberuD: I don't think I'll be able to help you beta the chapter if you're aiming for a Friday/Saturday release, I won't have so much time these 2 days ;;
On a lighter note, hearts for Dunsprace as well <3 -
July 23rd, 2009 3:06 AMLashAlmost done, I think I'm gonna shoot for a Friday/Saturday release. Want the chapter beforehand?
Dunsparce is in this chapter <3 -
July 23rd, 2009 1:54 AMIbuberuAh, great! That's sounds interesting, get down to writing then >:3
And I'll heart anything cute you write, actually. Kamon inclusive of course <3 -
July 21st, 2009 5:05 AMLashYeah, but the perverted-ness will gtfo when he's in Goldenrod, but its too much of a story spoiler to tell. The story idea for that changes some of his decisions by the end of the story. I think that's a good reason why I can't tell XD
Still, the time his perverted side is revealed shall be a funny one. Or at least I'll try my best to MakeDamnSure</Taking Back Sunday>.
But yeah, I'm also going to go with the stupidity part. I'm also thinking of making him cuss more.
Also, I know you will absolutely heart Ledyba <3 -
July 21st, 2009 12:39 AMIbuberuWelcome!
Yes, I think that would be a good way to spice Patrick up. And lol, 'good flaw' sounds like an oxymoron XD; Being perverted sounds interesting enough, and possibly could be a very entertaining flaw, do try to work on it then :3 -
July 18th, 2009 3:14 AMLashSpoiler:It's going to be fun explaining the cuteness of all the bug Pokémon throughout the chapter <3
I fixed up the things you pointed out before posting it, so take a read any chance ya have :D
edit: lol, I just noticed the review you posted XD [/is two hours late to reading it, wtf]
All and all, thanks for the review.
The reason for Patrick's perfection is because this isn't his first journey, he had time to build his maturity between quests. Alas, I shall study characters with flaws/imperfections to help spice Patrick up.
edit2: Think it would be a good flaw if I revealed his perverted side? XD
Other character flaws I'm thinking about are ones I have: Plain out stupidity, impatience, and even laziness. -
July 18th, 2009 1:22 AMIbuberuSpoiler:<3
You know me well, Lash. You know me well. Sounds interesting in any case, I can't wait to read it then. I should get down to reviewing this chapter first though ^^; -
July 17th, 2009 5:30 PMLashWell, it was more of something he said. He said "Frick" when he noticed how late it was, which is what Elliot usually says when something goes wrong or not according to plan XD
Something I'm sure you'll like because its friggin' cute:
Spoiler:I have a slightly smaller than normal Caterpie trying to eat Cyndaquil's food, but he is forced to share. I included the cuter parts of its anatomy, like its big ol' eyes. Then, it will have a bit of trouble getting up into the tree with its fellow Caterpie for the evolution process x3
So, yes. I am including the evolution process for bug Pokémon throughout the chapter. Thought it would be fun, considering how many bug Pokémon there are at Route 30 :3
Also, another spoiler.
Spoiler:Seriously, open at your own risk.Spoiler:Patrick catches a Ledyba. -
July 17th, 2009 2:57 PMIbuberuSpoiler:And, just so you know, the song that played to wake Patrick up is called Chapter Four by Avenged Sevenfold
And the album it's on is called Waking the Fallen, let us see if you can spot where I wrote that XD
Resistance was futile on my part x3
Also, find the Scrubs reference if you can.
Okay, that was just awesome to include a song like this in the next chapter, and it looks interesting enough :3
Ah, but I couldn't get that Scrubs reference at all [/fail] ._.; -
July 14th, 2009 5:23 AMLashOf course, just imagine a newborn Igglybuff <3
I hope you enjoy the battles. I actually gave reason for the first battle to be short (immobilization), while the main battle near the end, I worked on so it's not done in a flash like earlier battles were :3 -
July 14th, 2009 1:01 AMIbuberuRight you are :3 It certainly isn't as long, so I'll complete the beta-ing by tomorrow (:
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July 13th, 2009 3:32 AMLashDon't forget about Jigglypuff, just look how small and cute it is when young <3
Yep. You will probably have a new PM next time you get on, hopefully.


