Your region map that's set as your example is very inconsistent and even seems to be skewed vertically. Not meaning to be rude (well, maybe a little), but you'll have to up your game to compete with NNWoRM. :P
I'm not sure the giant font really shouts professionalism in the recruitment thread, but anyway. I'll need to see some evidence of work you've done towards making the game. You clearly have a good idea of the layout already, so some maps would be fine.