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September 15th, 2011 2:55 PMpoke_fan21all right and thank you
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September 15th, 2011 2:29 PMzapdos926Work on your post consistancy. You're getting better, but now you're using both past and present tense, as well as future tense. Please. Don't. Do that. Pick a tense and stick with it.
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September 12th, 2011 1:54 PMzapdos926You need to stop making your posts so short. Notice how everyone else can make a good five or six sentence post out of something like the funeral, where as you can barely make one? I'm getting very annoyed, and I'm sure the others are too. Short posts are grounds for booting you, remember. You haven't made even one good sized post. I'll give you a few more chances, but you're stretching it.
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September 10th, 2011 11:22 AMzapdos926You made another one liner....
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September 9th, 2011 7:22 PMpoke_fan21ok ill make my post more detailed
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September 9th, 2011 6:55 PMzapdos926I understand that it's hard to make a reply post, but seriously? A one liner. Add some detail about Vor's arrival. Also, Rafael doesn't know his name and, well, it's a one liner. That is a no no in the RP rules, which you should probably look through. Read previous posts and maybe some from other RP's. Too many short posts is grounds for kicking someone out.
Sorry if it seems like I'm being hard on you, but this is my first RP that has made it past page one, and I want it to do well. -
September 9th, 2011 5:16 AMzapdos926You need to work on consistancy in your posts. You're using both third and first person views, as well as speaking in the present tense. It is very hard to read things like that. Choose one point of view, and please use past tense. If you are utterly confused by what I'm saying, just read some of the other posts.
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September 9th, 2011 5:12 AMzapdos926Just stay active, please. And no one liners.
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September 8th, 2011 9:19 PMpoke_fan21ok thank you and im not the best rper but ill try my hardest
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September 8th, 2011 9:12 PMzapdos926Yes. Make a post about getting to the guild and Luna giving you a tour. You will be Megamans partner. You will have to make Rafael wait until megaman posts Vor going back to the guild.
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September 8th, 2011 9:07 PMpoke_fan21hey so i can start rping now
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September 7th, 2011 8:07 PMzapdos926You are now a member in PMD: Legend Rescue team. You will be partners with Vor the elgyem, AKA Megaman.
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September 3rd, 2011 9:37 PMzapdos926Accepted in PMD if Crebirk doesn't post in the next 24 hours


