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June 21st, 2010 7:05 AMHikari <3It was meant for shock. Since you're going to read the whole thing eventually, let me tell you now. It starts to switch perspectives after that. The book is far from over. I have part 2, and I'll PM it to you. It's short. Less than 1000 words. Not even a chapter. =/
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June 21st, 2010 7:03 AMHikari <3You'll see, you'll see... =]
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June 21st, 2010 7:02 AMEternal NightmareI didn't cry on the outside but I literallly broke down on the inside ;_;. Like that was such a major plot twist I thought they would get together but I see Kara was two faced. Poor Kris please tell me someone walks in...no wait don't tell me.
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June 21st, 2010 6:56 AMHikari <3Okay, but don't say I didn't warn you...
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June 21st, 2010 6:47 AMEternal NightmareJust got one so I shall read it right away after this VM, Hopefully its not enough to make me cry :^: but I'm excited to read it :D. With that said -goes to read chapter 4-
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June 21st, 2010 5:11 AMHikari <3Done chapter 4, but before I message you, I'd like to warn you that it is somewhat sad. If you have any questions once you're done reading it, PM or VM me. Since I don't know how much of chapter 4 you read, if any of it, I'll send you the whole thing. That way, you're set. :D
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June 20th, 2010 6:19 PMEternal NightmareAlrighty...trying to get this freakin sig up in css
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June 20th, 2010 5:52 PMHikari <3Haha, okay. I'll message it to you once it's completely done.
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June 20th, 2010 5:51 PMEternal NightmareStop making me anxious xD I'm wanna have my predictions and I bet I could be right...maybe wrong :[. Oh and no your not a bother at all. I'm glad to know someone with such a creative mind n_n.
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June 20th, 2010 5:42 PMHikari <3Sorry to bother you again, but I'm almost done chapter 4! :D
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June 20th, 2010 4:18 PMHikari <3Thanks, I'll look for that. And I'm not saying what will happen, but trust me, you'll be shocked. ^^
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June 20th, 2010 4:15 PMEternal NightmareI feel like I'm getting somewhere :D. I have a feeling the mom might change for the better...keeping my fingers crossed here. The whole phone and Richard scene were REALLY lifelike and you did an excellent job portraying that so well.
On a sidenote there were three errors I spotted. One was in the first paragraph as you used they instead of the, you spelt I think you spelt filfthy worng if I recall, and there was something else but I forgot ._. -
June 20th, 2010 3:52 PMHikari <3Ok, I'll send whatever you haven't read that I've written. :D
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June 20th, 2010 3:45 PMEternal NightmareAlright :] you can send them to me I'm itching for a good read
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June 20th, 2010 3:00 PMHikari <3I've written more. :D

