I'm really sorry but, for me this Rp lasts much too long to just go by 1 class...... So I guess I'll withdraw, sorry if anything causes trouble for you...
Do not assume others know anything about a character when writing his SU, as that's not the point of an SU. I want to see that you can accurately describe him. Last I checked, "Insert pictures of Ash here", this hadn't been done.
Oh... Well, to put it bluntly it's not properly filled out. Because of the serious risk of crack an application for a canon is actually more strict than that of an OC, because you're expected to be able to play them "well".
Ok! So just assuming that Ash would be the same age as Gary? right?
I'll work on it now! I'll use all the pokemon he found so far, well six of 'em anyway