So your a friend of Maqua's? (MRAS)
I honly read 2 so far, but I love your poems. I think out of the 2 (A loveless World ; Silent pain.)
I feel more to Silent Pain. Wonderful.
You could check out some of mine too. Their not all so great. i think my best is the first and third. those were long aga too. If i try again, I guess i can be better.