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June 6th, 2011 6:14 AMAura.LucarioI don't mind if it's the same. just gotta keep the RP running. you should go up to the roof and snatch the intruder. ASK HIM QUESTIONS
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June 6th, 2011 5:29 AMElectricScytherHey, I'm trying to post in War but all my posts seem the same. Any suggestions?
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June 3rd, 2011 5:50 AMAura.LucarioI listen to everything out there, and I don't have a fav! :)
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June 3rd, 2011 5:47 AMElectricScytherSo what kind of music do you like?
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June 3rd, 2011 5:02 AMAura.Lucarioit is...but the PR commander ain't planning an attack...oh well, you can be in charge :)
you gonna state how many people you're gonna send into the battlefield and stuff. -
June 3rd, 2011 4:58 AMElectricScytherI said the attack on Jubilife. The "Plot" section of your post says that's PokeRebel's first goal.
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June 3rd, 2011 4:44 AMAura.LucarioScyther, the PR only has Canalave, so maybe it should be Canalave instead of Jubilife. The Humans are still taking over Jubilife
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June 2nd, 2011 3:35 AMAura.Lucariohey Scyther, you're the General, so you should post more often :) sorry if i'm giving you pressure, but you people gotta plan your attacks like the Humans!
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June 1st, 2011 6:17 AMElectricScytherHere's your post. Go on, read it!
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June 1st, 2011 6:01 AMAura.LucarioI wanna go to america and you wanna leave?! Btw I need your post! Post in War so I can have a mission. Generals can give me a mission too. tell me to go to the Human base in Sunnyshore right now! :) it's settled
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June 1st, 2011 5:57 AMElectricScytherHah, lucky. I'm stuck in America, but as soon as I get out of college, I'm leaving.
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May 31st, 2011 8:05 PMAura.LucarioI'm from Hong Kong :) and I use both English. American AND British. British in writing, but American when it comes to oral english
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May 31st, 2011 9:37 AMElectricScytherJudging by your spelling I would say that you are either from Britain, Canada, or Australia. Lucky...
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May 28th, 2011 12:38 PMElectricScytherHmm... you could give him some common problem like, for example, the one I always give my characters, which would be insecurity and a low self image. Seriously, read my SUs and you'll get an idea of how much I use it.:P
Or, you could make him afraid of something for no reason... or a very good reason. He could fear almost anything, as long as it's relevant to the story.
Then, he could be rude, cocky, arrogant, or irritable, or anything else you would instantly notice, but I wouldn't suggest this since you already have kind of laid out Lucifer's personality.
Finally, he could be too determined to accomplish something. He could be willing to resort to low means to recover his memory, or endanger others, or whatever. He could also "use" Wade.
BTW, although this is a little bit random, what kind of music do you listen to? -
May 27th, 2011 5:04 PMAura.Lucariothanks Scyther, any suggestions of a flaw for Lucifer?
btw, the mystery will be solved in a few chapters, and you won't feel confused after that. what confuses you the most, may i ask?
and you say the chapters need to change, and need to leave suspense right? well...since my chapters are about 2500-3000 words per chapter i can't really change much...the number of words per chapter's fixed already and I cannot change it, or turn a 2500 word chapter into a 4000 word.

