nothing. im at a hotel. the reason ive have not been on the the internet is the dial up modem went out and mom and dad are not buying another one so im on at the hotel.
hm, nothing much. Re-reading a RP I was in a little while ago, trying to get some inspiration for newer RP's I'm in. I haven't been real active here as of recently.
Oh. I have to get up at 6:30 in the morning, and its about 1:00 in the morning, so I should probably be getting to bed within the next half hour to an hour.
you aren't that bad. By the looks of it, it seems like you just need to be a bit more decriptive. Like when your character says something, in your post, explain how they said it, what they were doing when they said it, how they were feeling, and what was happening around them. Okay, not all of that has to be added, thats just some things that can be included.
I don't know how much help I'll be, people don't usually ask me for help.