No it's pretty good. Mine is just the Symbol of the Kirial Hope with Silhouettes of Life poorly written underneath. The rest is just the bars, aside from Ruby Version being replaced with DarkPurity. I think it could use something more to spice it up. I'm guessing the storyline has something to do with Mewtwo?
Well what do you have so far?
You have to keep it going, all the time. Excitement and mysteries at every corner. Something you're truly passionate about, and new unexpected things. You could use a Cliché but add something new or different.