nothin just had my life spoiled by giradialkia
through a vm that the thread was not aproved
the complete vm that spoiled my life
The thread wasn't approved, I'm afraid. Colcolstyles was on when the thread was submitted so he didn't think it met the criteria, and I suppose I'll have to agree with him. The story you wrote in the VM below.. I don't think you understood what I meant by "lengthening the story". I'd assumed you'd have already more of the story planned. If you're throwing together a story just so it can be approved and it still doesn't meet the requirements, then you really, really do need to take a step back and spend much more time on the hack before submitting.