Conversation Between Bay and Elite Overlord LeSabre™
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  1. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    February 20th, 2009 8:02 PM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    You've caught me at a bad time for a BETA:/ Monday I have a test in (IMO) my hardest test to date:/ Might be Wednesday before I can get the chapter back to you...
  2. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    February 8th, 2009 9:25 PM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    I mainly focus on grammar, so have him look it over first. Any other comments I'll save for the actual review (like with Matt calling the police before seeking medical treatment that I pointed out in the last chapter.)

    And actually, I have a new beta request on Sppf, so I'd like to devote this week to getting hers done as well as updating and editing my early chapters.
  3. Bay
    February 8th, 2009 7:29 PM
    Bay
    Hey, DP! Um, sorry to ask, but is it alright if The Great Butler looks over the chapter before you, or would you rather have him check it after you? The Great Butler asked me if he could also look over the chapter and proofread like he did before (I let him check Chapter 20 beforehand since Matt's his character, not mine).

    Oh, if you're wondering when I'll send you Chapter 21, I'm not actually sure. I got a lot of things going on and was unable to revise the chapter. I might give it to you next week, though (this could also depend on your answer towards my question).
  4. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    February 1st, 2009 9:38 PM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    STEELERS 27 CARDINALS 23 BOO-YA!

    If you want to give one of my characters the same treatment you gave Butler's in your fic, let me know:]

    Congrats on your awards, BTW:]
  5. Bay
    January 25th, 2009 9:13 PM
    Bay
    Shoot, one more thing: If there's any awkward sentences you can't seem to fix, let me know and I'll try to fix them myself! Sorry about that, forgot to put it in the PM. ^^;
  6. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    November 9th, 2008 10:11 PM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    New username. Fwee. Think of it as the Witness Protection Program, only less effective XD
  7. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    November 4th, 2008 12:42 AM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    Happy Birthday! Free baygels for everyone XD
  8. Bay
    September 22nd, 2008 11:43 AM
    Bay
    That's fine. I know you probably have a couple of things to take care up/want to do, so yeah.

    Also, cool, looking forward to this weekend, then. XD Speaking of which, I'll actually give you Chapter 17 a few days after Chapter 16 is posted so that I can have Chapter 17 be posted on my birthday. XD
  9. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    September 22nd, 2008 11:03 AM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    I know I haven't been on here much lately, or on the other place for that matter, but I have my reasons XD If you really want to know, ask bobandbill; I already told him XD

    Anyway, the beta should be done by this weekend.
  10. Bay
    August 13th, 2008 9:17 AM
    Bay
    Just letting you know I asked duncan to see if he would be willing to beta Chapter 15 to check for those awkward sentences before I post the chapter. Will let you know if he accepts!

    EDIT: duncan accepts. :D So yeah, it'll probably be a few more days until I post that chapter! XD
  11. Bay
    August 5th, 2008 10:15 AM
    Bay
    Hey, DP! Just want to let you know I'm writing up the review for your fic! Watch out for that at Serebii! ;)

    EDIT: Posted the review at Serebii! :D
  12. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    July 9th, 2008 8:27 PM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    Hey, whenever you're ready, you can send your fic over for me to look at:)
  13. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    July 4th, 2008 9:05 PM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    Sure, I'll take a look at it! Send it to me sometime mid-week (Tuesday or Wednesday would be good XD) and I'll try to get it back ASAP!
  14. Bay
    July 3rd, 2008 3:39 PM
    Bay
    Hey, DarkPersian! Can I ask you a quick question? Would you like to beta my one-shot, "Hounds of Goldenrod" before betaing Chapter Fifteen of my fic? I want to have that one-shot be ready before July 30 since I'm going to enter it for this moth's FCC prompt. ^^;
  15. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    June 16th, 2008 7:31 PM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    I sent you chapter 13, so feel free to send over chapter 14 whenever you're ready!