Conversation Between psyanic and docowocool
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  1. docowocool
    August 7th, 2012 8:02 AM
    docowocool
    OK, thanks, I've been having problems with the computer, but I can now send you what I have written of Chapter 2, aka. not much. I will email you with feedback! :) and will edit Chapter 1!
  2. psyanic
    August 5th, 2012 12:08 PM
    psyanic
    Hey I finished the review yesterday and I sent it yesterday on the e-mail you gave me!
  3. docowocool
    July 31st, 2012 7:37 PM
    docowocool
    OK then.
  4. psyanic
    July 31st, 2012 7:31 PM
    psyanic
    I'm still working on it, unfortunately. It might be a tad late as I'm extremely busy tomorrow, going to the DMV among other things. I'll be sure to e-mail you, though.
  5. docowocool
    July 31st, 2012 7:16 PM
    docowocool
    Good idea! Have you finished the "look" at it yet? Ave you got any feedback? email it to [email protected] not as an attachment.
  6. psyanic
    July 31st, 2012 7:09 PM
    psyanic
    Hmm, before you post, you might want to proofread, because the spacing between words, as well as the spacing between paragraphs, gets funky. Some words aren't separated by spaces, while you put an extra line when spacing out paragraphs.

    You only need one space, not any more. Just like how I typed this up.

    Shame D:
  7. docowocool
    July 31st, 2012 6:52 PM
    docowocool
    Yeah, the spelling kinda freaked me out.
    Disclaimer: I used a spell checker. Then copied and pasted. Shame, no-one wants to join Splash :(.
  8. psyanic
    July 31st, 2012 5:37 PM
    psyanic
    Eh, that's not too much, tbh. And the spacing is weird in some places.

    I'm not one for clubs; I'm horribly inactive and severely apathetic. But they're not bad Pokemon.
  9. docowocool
    July 31st, 2012 3:29 PM
    docowocool
    three pages?? Wow. I meant, do you like the two pokemon? Oh, and do you want to join their club that I founded.
  10. psyanic
    July 31st, 2012 3:21 PM
    psyanic
    Magikarp and Gyarados are virtually the same, really.

    It was about three pages, while I marked all over the first page.
  11. docowocool
    July 31st, 2012 2:26 PM
    docowocool
    OK, good luck. How many pages was it? Anyway, I'm not rushing it. I've just beaten Roark in the story and playthrough, and progressed deeper into Oreburgh Gate. Do you like Magikarp or Gyarados?
  12. psyanic
    July 31st, 2012 2:04 PM
    psyanic
    I've printed it out and I've been looking over it, but typing it up will be the real hassle. I just made a few notes here and there because I have volunteering eight hours a day.

    You don't have to rush yourself.
  13. docowocool
    July 31st, 2012 5:39 AM
    docowocool
    Edit that, I'm on a not working computer with WiFi at the minute. :( It won't let me email :(
  14. docowocool
    July 31st, 2012 5:22 AM
    docowocool
    I'm on a working computer with WiFi at the minute, I haven't finished chapter two, but I'll email what I've done to you. :) Have you reviewed chapter one yet?
  15. docowocool
    July 30th, 2012 9:26 AM
    docowocool
    OK, thanks. I have written two paagraphs of Chapter 2 so far. I'll check out your review later.