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August 7th, 2012 8:02 AMdocowocoolOK, thanks, I've been having problems with the computer, but I can now send you what I have written of Chapter 2, aka. not much. I will email you with feedback! :) and will edit Chapter 1!
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August 5th, 2012 12:08 PMpsyanicHey I finished the review yesterday and I sent it yesterday on the e-mail you gave me!
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July 31st, 2012 7:37 PMdocowocoolOK then.
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July 31st, 2012 7:31 PMpsyanicI'm still working on it, unfortunately. It might be a tad late as I'm extremely busy tomorrow, going to the DMV among other things. I'll be sure to e-mail you, though.
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July 31st, 2012 7:16 PMdocowocoolGood idea! Have you finished the "look" at it yet? Ave you got any feedback? email it to [email protected] not as an attachment.
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July 31st, 2012 7:09 PMpsyanicHmm, before you post, you might want to proofread, because the spacing between words, as well as the spacing between paragraphs, gets funky. Some words aren't separated by spaces, while you put an extra line when spacing out paragraphs.
You only need one space, not any more. Just like how I typed this up.
Shame D: -
July 31st, 2012 6:52 PMdocowocoolYeah, the spelling kinda freaked me out.
Disclaimer: I used a spell checker. Then copied and pasted. Shame, no-one wants to join Splash :(. -
July 31st, 2012 5:37 PMpsyanicEh, that's not too much, tbh. And the spacing is weird in some places.
I'm not one for clubs; I'm horribly inactive and severely apathetic. But they're not bad Pokemon. -
July 31st, 2012 3:29 PMdocowocoolthree pages?? Wow. I meant, do you like the two pokemon? Oh, and do you want to join their club that I founded.
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July 31st, 2012 3:21 PMpsyanicMagikarp and Gyarados are virtually the same, really.
It was about three pages, while I marked all over the first page. -
July 31st, 2012 2:26 PMdocowocoolOK, good luck. How many pages was it? Anyway, I'm not rushing it. I've just beaten Roark in the story and playthrough, and progressed deeper into Oreburgh Gate. Do you like Magikarp or Gyarados?
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July 31st, 2012 2:04 PMpsyanicI've printed it out and I've been looking over it, but typing it up will be the real hassle. I just made a few notes here and there because I have volunteering eight hours a day.
You don't have to rush yourself. -
July 31st, 2012 5:39 AMdocowocoolEdit that, I'm on a not working computer with WiFi at the minute. :( It won't let me email :(
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July 31st, 2012 5:22 AMdocowocoolI'm on a working computer with WiFi at the minute, I haven't finished chapter two, but I'll email what I've done to you. :) Have you reviewed chapter one yet?
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July 30th, 2012 9:26 AMdocowocoolOK, thanks. I have written two paagraphs of Chapter 2 so far. I'll check out your review later.


