Just one suggestion here, I'd say that you should lengthen out your chapters. It's a bit short and I could read it quickly. There is little going on, since it is such a short chapter, so it would be better if you combined a few things and made your chapters more than just three paragraphs. Besides, you just posted the prologue and posting too fast could be detrimental overall.
Also, in my new fanfic, the new hedgehog trio. I post first chapter, like, yesterday!!!!!! XDDDD Remember, one in first post was epilouge, this is chpater one.