That one went over my head. Anyways, you didn't post how Adelle reacted to Llednar walking in and turning to leave. You may want to do something about him... Because he's kind of got nothing to do.
Ok thanks for the tip, lol.
Ya know i was thinking something.......for the RP.......Im not telling you though cause its more fun and i like to keep it a surprise, lol. But here is a clue.... Adelle and death..... you might think the wrong thing, lol.
Oh and btw i went up to Xilfer's room (Im his sister we live together) and he is writing his intro in Pokemon a new world so he might take a few minuets to post :)