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Conversation Between poke_fan21 and PkMnTrainer Yellow
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  1. poke_fan21
    September 12th, 2011 1:58 PM
    hope i did it right
  2. PkMnTrainer Yellow
    September 11th, 2011 10:22 AM
    PkMnTrainer Yellow
    It's looking better. There is still one thing you can improve and that's the grammar.

    In roleplay people refer their characters in third person. That means instead of "I am around 5ft 5in tall." you would say "Rafael Obeng is around 5ft 5in tall."

    I know it seems kind of trivial, but it honestly drives some people crazy.

    Then there's the spelling and grammar. I have here a spellcheck addon that will work with either Chrome or Firefox which will allow you to easily check your spelling and grammar.

    Here's the Chrome version

    Here's the Firefox version

    If you install that addon you'll see a green checkmark with the letters ABC to the lower right of your posting boxs. If you click said checkmark it'll scan your post for any errors. With the exception of names it's pretty accurate.

    If you simply run that over your SU and let it fix everything that isn't a name after you've switched to third person you should be good to go.

    Sorry about asking you to do all this.
  3. poke_fan21
    September 11th, 2011 6:18 AM
    made new and improved SU
  4. PkMnTrainer Yellow
    September 10th, 2011 11:01 PM
    PkMnTrainer Yellow
    I've replied in the OOC thread to the SU. It needs some tweaking to be accepted, but if you're willing to work on it we can work on getting you in.
  5. PkMnTrainer Yellow
    September 10th, 2011 10:36 PM
    PkMnTrainer Yellow
    Okie day. Just gimme a bit to discuss it with the other GM
  6. poke_fan21
    September 10th, 2011 10:20 PM
    done with my su tell me what you think about it
  7. PkMnTrainer Yellow
    September 10th, 2011 9:11 PM
    PkMnTrainer Yellow
    Yes please c:
  8. poke_fan21
    September 10th, 2011 9:02 PM
    ok want me to post my SU in the OOC thread
  9. PkMnTrainer Yellow
    September 10th, 2011 8:56 PM
    PkMnTrainer Yellow
    Yes there are. There are currently spots available in Suicune Dorm and Raikou Dorm.
  10. poke_fan21
    September 10th, 2011 8:51 PM
    in pokemon trainer school rp are there any spots so i can sign up

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