Conversation Between poke_fan21 and zapdos926
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  1. poke_fan21
    September 15th, 2011 2:55 PM
    all right and thank you
  2. zapdos926
    September 15th, 2011 2:29 PM
    Work on your post consistancy. You're getting better, but now you're using both past and present tense, as well as future tense. Please. Don't. Do that. Pick a tense and stick with it.
  3. zapdos926
    September 12th, 2011 1:54 PM
    You need to stop making your posts so short. Notice how everyone else can make a good five or six sentence post out of something like the funeral, where as you can barely make one? I'm getting very annoyed, and I'm sure the others are too. Short posts are grounds for booting you, remember. You haven't made even one good sized post. I'll give you a few more chances, but you're stretching it.
  4. zapdos926
    September 10th, 2011 11:22 AM
    You made another one liner....
  5. poke_fan21
    September 9th, 2011 7:22 PM
    ok ill make my post more detailed
  6. zapdos926
    September 9th, 2011 6:55 PM
    I understand that it's hard to make a reply post, but seriously? A one liner. Add some detail about Vor's arrival. Also, Rafael doesn't know his name and, well, it's a one liner. That is a no no in the RP rules, which you should probably look through. Read previous posts and maybe some from other RP's. Too many short posts is grounds for kicking someone out.

    Sorry if it seems like I'm being hard on you, but this is my first RP that has made it past page one, and I want it to do well.
  7. zapdos926
    September 9th, 2011 5:16 AM
    You need to work on consistancy in your posts. You're using both third and first person views, as well as speaking in the present tense. It is very hard to read things like that. Choose one point of view, and please use past tense. If you are utterly confused by what I'm saying, just read some of the other posts.
  8. zapdos926
    September 9th, 2011 5:12 AM
    Just stay active, please. And no one liners.
  9. poke_fan21
    September 8th, 2011 9:19 PM
    ok thank you and im not the best rper but ill try my hardest
  10. zapdos926
    September 8th, 2011 9:12 PM
    Yes. Make a post about getting to the guild and Luna giving you a tour. You will be Megamans partner. You will have to make Rafael wait until megaman posts Vor going back to the guild.
  11. poke_fan21
    September 8th, 2011 9:07 PM
    hey so i can start rping now
  12. zapdos926
    September 7th, 2011 8:07 PM
    You are now a member in PMD: Legend Rescue team. You will be partners with Vor the elgyem, AKA Megaman.
  13. zapdos926
    September 3rd, 2011 9:37 PM
    Accepted in PMD if Crebirk doesn't post in the next 24 hours

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