Conversation Between Squirrel and Kroso
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  1. Kroso
    July 15th, 2012 2:03 PM
    Kroso
    Actually it is, using you is when the author is the one narrating the story.
  2. Squirrel
    July 15th, 2012 10:33 AM
    Squirrel
    That's not 3rd person though lol
  3. Kroso
    July 15th, 2012 8:30 AM
    Kroso
    The story is in 3rd person perspective, the style is more interesting to me.
    Do you have complains?
  4. Squirrel
    July 15th, 2012 8:09 AM
    Squirrel
    It sounds good, but why is the person referred to as "you"? That's a really interesting style :3
  5. Kroso
    July 15th, 2012 6:10 AM
    Kroso
    It's a fan fiction.
    And it's only two paragraphs.
  6. Squirrel
    July 15th, 2012 6:01 AM
    Squirrel
    I think it looks long :<

    What's it for? A CP?
  7. Kroso
    July 15th, 2012 4:28 AM
    Kroso
    Spoiler:
    "Where am I?" You asked yourself as you looked around the landscape. You start moving around trying to escape, you soon found it very futile that you could ever escape. You couldn't comprehend how you landed here, one minute you were tucked away into your cozy bed and now you're here. You're trembling at the bare thought of your family not noticing your disappearance, since this is the first time you ever been alone..... and stranded.

    You look around, trying to remember what they taught you in school in case you were ever stranded. You remember the first thing that they taught you was to build a shelter, however it occurred to you that you'll need to find the material in order to build shelter. Looking around you spot a tree trunk, approaching it you begin to think on how to cut the trunk apart so you look in your clothing to see if you still had your lucky tool kit.


    Whatcha think?
  8. Squirrel
    July 13th, 2012 6:40 PM
    Squirrel
    I do, games are awesome!
  9. Kroso
    July 13th, 2012 4:58 PM
    Kroso
    Who needs games when I've my PS library to play with?
  10. Squirrel
    July 13th, 2012 4:48 PM
    Squirrel
    What games?
  11. Kroso
    July 13th, 2012 4:06 PM
    Kroso
    I now own a PS Vita.
  12. Squirrel
    July 13th, 2012 2:03 PM
    Squirrel
    What song am I thinking of right now?
  13. Kroso
    July 13th, 2012 2:00 PM
    Kroso
    Please, you're one ugly cat.
  14. Squirrel
    July 13th, 2012 1:49 PM
    Squirrel
  15. Kroso
    July 13th, 2012 6:41 AM
    Kroso