You needn't worry Greiger, your post is perfect. You followed all the guidelines I set for first posts... plus I never gave any restrictions on what your partner pokémon could be doing, glad to see you've (perhaps without realising perhaps not) taken full advantage of that fact. ^-^
I hope that post is quite alright in HS, if not then just send me a VM or PM. Not sure what the procedure is when such an event happens in the throne room.