I don't think that was enough editing... It has to end with the launch of the attack. You stated in your rules no god-modding. Saying that the attacks hit at all counts. It should end more like "Lily used sing and followed it up with several assist attacks." it should end right there.
IDK if you know this or not, but in your last post, that counts as god modding. When you are battling another RPer, your post needs to end with the launch of your attack, that way they decide wheter or not the attack hits. If you, being the attacker state that the attack hits, that is unfair, because then the defender has no chance in evasion. It doesnt matter with an NPC, but when you're fighting someone else, it is strictly counted as god modding to say your attack hit. Just FYI.
I'll wait until all the teams at least have four people in them. So right now I think I could do Team Silver and that's it. You'll have to wait until later tonight though beacause im currently grounded from the computer (I'm posting from my iPod) so at l around 9:00-9:30 I can get started.