Conversation Between docowocool and Elite Overlord LeSabre™
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  1. docowocool
    July 26th, 2012 12:11 PM
    docowocool
    I like chapter 3 of Lisa leaf. People should use drunk Pikachus more often... PLEASE can you help me choose a Buick for my story, I need one or two for Chao' escape scenes.Do you think it would be OTT having Haos and Leaf beat up and mortally injure about 100 rockets? Anyways, do you know if good old Haruka of Hoenn is doing more of ROOTS? Can't wait to read more. I can't wait to read more of your works either. I as walkng round, and saw this guy, doing a prize draw for a mini "Wouldn't you rather have a Buick?" I say to him. He looks at me. "What in hell is a Buick???" he shouts. LOL. "NEWSFLAS!, a Buick is a car!"I say.
  2. docowocool
    July 25th, 2012 2:30 PM
    docowocool
    OK, I will read and maybe review your chapter three. Thank you for reading my story, I would like it if you posted a revew, but possibly you could wait until chapter two is rewritten and chapter three is up? You may be pleased to know, I have a lot more of Leaf in The Hoenn Dragons. There is a scene I am writing, where she and Haos have to beat up some Rockets. ;) Girl power! has his scene of that too, but he runs away (flies). I will probably send you another VM when I have reviewed for you, orhave another chapter. Oh, and there is a getaway in a Buick... not sure which though, can you help me choose?
  3. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    July 25th, 2012 1:07 PM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    I have just posted chapter 3 of my story.

    As for yours, I read through what you have and... it needs quite a bit of work, sad to say. If you still want, I can still post with what needs changing, though it's mostly going to be a repeat of what others have already mentioned.
  4. docowocool
    July 20th, 2012 7:32 AM
    docowocool
    Hi, I should've warned you, I was away for a week. I haven't read any more Leaf thngy, I will catch up later. In my rewrite of The Hoenn Dragons, Leaf is on it, thrashing a kid wh has a volcarona. I was going to gie Leaf a magikarp xd. I kept talking about Buicks to my friend on the coach! He fell asleep...
  5. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    July 12th, 2012 4:35 PM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    Please stop needlessly posting spam messages on my profile.
  6. docowocool
    July 7th, 2012 1:56 AM
    docowocool
    ;) it isn't the LEGENDARYs trying to destroy the world, it is Giovanni trying to destroy the world so that he can capture... *puts hand over mouth* no spoilers. The end scene has the world being destroyed but thats that. Most of it is the legendarys killing Giovanni and *hand on mouth* trying to *hand on mouth*. Leaf is in it! From chapter 6 to chapter 23. Giovanni tris to beat Leaf with a Pikachu -sure youd appreciate the irony.Raquaza smashs a hole through Giovannis heart and throws him in lava! ... no more spoilers.

    Anyways, do you know when Haruka of Hoenn is going to do more ROOTS? Yes, Iknowhe is on holiday.

    Badger on at ya later, docowocool
  7. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    July 6th, 2012 1:12 PM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    Hmmm... legendaries trying to destroy the world really isn't something I read about either, especially since it's so overused in the games... less legendaries, more wire fraud and embezzlement, I always say.

    Yeah, we go a looooong way back xD

    Progress is being made... and next chapter is where you'll really see what my major influences were for it, at least for the action scenes.
  8. docowocool
    July 6th, 2012 12:05 AM
    docowocool
    Oh. I dont know why she caught them either...
    My story is about Chaos who is the champion of all the regions, the Hoenn dragon trio, Team Rocket and the destruction of the Pokemon world. (expect Arceus in there breifly too)

    On another note, I assume your one story you are reviewing is Haruka of Hoenn's ROOTS professerfic. Been their read that read EVERY single review... get back from vacation I say...

    Good luck with Lisa's and Leaf's next chapter. I haven't had the chance to read any more of Lurking in the Shadows yet and only about 4 hours a day on Pokecommunity (and only 20 mins today).

    Speak to ya soon, docowocool
  9. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    July 5th, 2012 1:10 PM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    It was Aron... don't expect to see much of it, though.... looking back, I don't know why I had her capture all the random Pokemon she'd never use :P As for which starter, who knows xD Probably a Buick Park Avenue or something :P I never planned on her having any other starter.

    Um, what's your story about? I only review one other story here currently, and there are certain types of stories I don't look at (ones with Pokemon only and no trainers for example.) at all.
  10. docowocool
    July 5th, 2012 10:53 AM
    docowocool
    OK I can bear waiting... What was Lisa's steel type that she caught in a double wild battle then... I can't remeber. Which starter would Lisa have taken if not Meowth? PLEASE review my latest pile of rubbish excuse for a story soon...
  11. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    July 5th, 2012 6:50 AM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    Now, now, now, you can't rush things here... Expect it by the end of the weekend att eh latest, if all goes well. Chapter 20... not bad. But Lisa never had a Rhydon and she benched Nidorino in the PC... I have differnet plans for her final team.

    And I felt like a change in scenery if you will... something non-Pokemon related for a change, and my next few won't be Pokemon-related either. Besides, BEHOLD THE AWESOMENESS THAT IS ROCK HILL, SOUTH CAROLINA! It's much better than any town in the Pokemon universe.
  12. docowocool
    July 4th, 2012 1:01 PM
    docowocool
    Hi. Havent spoken to the brilliant mind behind Lisa Northwood in awhile... Hurry up with Leafs story. IM on chapter 20 of Lurking in the shadows. LOL. Lisa ought to use rhydon or nidorino more often. Wats up with changing ur prof pic and signiture...
  13. docowocool
    June 28th, 2012 10:38 AM
    docowocool
    What? The one with Leaf? OK, I will. Should't be too much of a problem, seeing it's only a few chapters long. Which games is Leaf in? I should know but can't remember... Playing Pokemon Yellow at the mo, I shoved the evil electric rat pokemon in a computer as soon as I caught a lvl2 pidgey and lvl4 rattata they are lvl 7 now and I have a Pigeotto lvl9 that I caught. The old games are the best...
  14. Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    June 28th, 2012 8:52 AM
    Elite Overlord LeSabre™
    Cool! If you want to do so for my latest story too, feel free :P
  15. docowocool
    June 28th, 2012 7:41 AM
    docowocool
    Found the web adress and reading now... Will give some opinion and (hopefully) some constructive criticism