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November 12th, 2013 1:55 PMStarspriteWell I'd say that's a fairly common downfall then. It's always good to have a relative plan.
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November 12th, 2013 2:36 AMNathanWhat did I say? I'm willing to help :P
I didn't plan things far enough. -
November 11th, 2013 6:29 PMStarspriteWell thank you very much. I might just completely abuse that privilege take you up on that.
Oh? Did you have trouble staying active? Or was your RP cluttered? Something else? -
November 11th, 2013 6:04 PMNathanI'd be willing to help ^^
Lack of coordination from my part. -
November 11th, 2013 5:45 PMStarspriteI know how you feel. I had a Pokemon RP on here once upon a time. I personally think it was a fairly unique concept, which saved it from being 'just another Pokemon RP' but the big problem with it was that it required ALL members to participate. It barely even got started, sadly enough, because people went inactive before I even got enough people to sign up. I'm thinking about remastering it with an entirely different theme some time.
What happened to yours? -
November 11th, 2013 5:39 PMNathanI do! My first one failed so I'm taking extra precautions.
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November 11th, 2013 5:37 PMStarspriteWell that takes lots and lots of practice. I'm sure you know that.
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November 11th, 2013 5:18 PMNathanI'm good at making original RPs :]
But I'm not the best GM... -
November 11th, 2013 5:14 PMStarspriteTrust me when I tell you that your concept is better than the average. So I hope you're using not-the-best literally and not as a way of putting your own writing down.
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November 11th, 2013 5:11 PMNathanYup, I'm not the best so help is welcome!
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November 11th, 2013 5:10 PMStarspriteReally? That's surprising. xD
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November 11th, 2013 4:57 PMNathanThanks! This'll help!
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November 11th, 2013 4:41 PMStarspriteThere wasn't really anything I didn't like. Some things were not terribly well explained, which is understandable in a short summary. I'll go ahead and elaborate on that, but please don't take this as a huge criticism because it is not by any means.
First, the A1000 and A2000 thing is not explained the best. By that I mean that I can't really see why any society would desire a bunch of heavily armed robots. I would personally have thought that the domestic A1000 would be more popular for its practicality and non-threatening build, but that can probably be easily worked around by describing the culture in this time period.
Second, this anti-tech group sure sounds good at programming. I don't quite understand how they released a virus if they shunned all aspects of technology. That's just me nitpicking though.
Finally, the society you're describing sounds too unorganized and miniscule to have a full on school setting. Where do you plan on going with that? How would you describe what you're picturing? -
November 11th, 2013 3:20 PMNathanI'm up for all suggestions. What didn't you like?
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November 11th, 2013 2:44 PMStarspriteThat sounds pretty awesome. I especially like the opening part because it seems so realistic. By that I mean that if we were to have a fully technology oriented society, I imagine there would be quite the lump of extremists to oppose it. I find the next part a little more bizarre, but I don't know how much you really want to discuss it.
Is it going to be left exactly as is, or are you still in the process of brainstorming? Either way, I bet it'll be great. c:

