Conversation Between pat20cool and Vato
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  1. pat20cool
    November 4th, 2012 6:03 PM
    Huh...Well...Joey nice knowing ya buddy!
  2. Vato
    November 4th, 2012 10:01 AM
    Mmm... there appears to be a problem with your most recent post in Time & Space... See, the S.S. Libra II in this reboot is a small, modest ship with limited capacity, so, yeah, I don't think that a captain in a ship that will take them to a secret meeting (shhh) nehind Team Galactic's back would be noisy telling everyone to board, y'know? That also means all of the awesomesauce stuff in the S.S. Libra II is now gone too. That also means that Youngster Joey has no possible reason to be aboard. And since only the Trainers chosen by the Professors are aboard... there can't really be a crowd around Patrick. So yeah... Can you please edit those small bits? You may still keep the battle, as long as it's not aboard the ship
  3. pat20cool
    October 28th, 2012 4:44 PM
    Could you read over my post? If it's not that much of a bother..
  4. Vato
    October 28th, 2012 4:27 PM
    It's okay, just as long as you keep in the guidelines
  5. pat20cool
    October 28th, 2012 4:14 PM
    Yeah, I'm editing my post now. I'm just going to say that I was rebuilding with Phanpy and Elm, but also being mentored. I'll also break up my posts, so it'll be easier to read.
  6. Vato
    October 23rd, 2012 5:58 PM
    Sure, just as long as you end up riding the Libra with Phanpy
  7. pat20cool
    October 23rd, 2012 10:09 AM
    Yeah maybe, so could my first few posts be, before I actually meet Phanpy? Or could Elm give me the Phanpy for the year, before we actually set off?
  8. Vato
    October 22nd, 2012 5:28 PM
    Mmm... Maybe him and Skarmory helped reconstruct the town or something among those lines?
  9. pat20cool
    October 22nd, 2012 9:36 AM
    Well.. I don't know what Patrick could be doing for that year after the storm? Like I could say that he stayed with Elm for the year as his apprentice, but does that not sound bland or cliché?
  10. Vato
    October 22nd, 2012 9:19 AM
    Sure, what can I help you with?
  11. pat20cool
    October 22nd, 2012 8:39 AM
    Vato, I'm sorta stuck in editing my First Post to Time and Space...could you lend a hand?
  12. pat20cool
    October 16th, 2012 11:22 PM
    Oh yeah I forgot about that... I'm just trying to work out where Patrick could wait for that year?

    I'll redo the post, except the catwalk...personally I felt that broke the tension of the serious moment lol
  13. Vato
    October 16th, 2012 5:46 PM
    Hey buddy
    Just wanted to say something: remember you begin in Time & Space one year after the disaster, meaning there could be no way Patrick had just survived the disasters a while ago.

    You also just copy pasted your first post from Time & Space, except for the catwalk xD
  14. pat20cool
    October 13th, 2012 5:39 AM
  15. Vato
    October 12th, 2012 5:39 PM
    Time & Space is now back as Pokemon: A Journey Beyond Time and Space! :D

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