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Conversation Between Khawill and Retro Bug
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  1. Retro Bug
    August 6th, 2014 6:18 PM
    Retro Bug
    I'm going to write it as if it were you writing it, since that would make more sense.

    "One, I need for you to stay right there because if you move one more step I'll shoot you dead and I don't want to get blood on my uniform, I just got this dry-cleaned!" The Departer spoke with a smile and an upbeat tone as if they were best buds. "Does this make me look fat? I think it's a bit too tight... Reckon you'd go out on a date with me looking like this?" He lowered his weapon, but the other two raised theirs in unison, and tugged at the abdominal region of his shirt with both hands.
  2. Khawill
    August 6th, 2014 4:53 PM
    Khawill
    Oh and he is laughing+staring him right in the eye
  3. Khawill
    August 6th, 2014 4:49 PM
    Khawill
    "None of us have weapons" I said in Onzorian with a manic tone, "After all, uns are such a little girl's weapon, so why don't you come over here and allow me to kill you like a man."
  4. Retro Bug
    August 6th, 2014 3:44 PM
    Retro Bug
    He would laugh. He'd then said "You wish I was a girl," does grinding motions aka sexually suggestive hip moving motions. "Unless you swing that way, which yeah, man, I'll make out with you no sweat." Gives him a sh-t-eating grin. "But I'd had to ask my girlfriend here. She gets a bit jealous if I don't tell her, gives her a chance to join in!"

    If you give me the actual line, I can type up a proper response if you want.
  5. Khawill
    August 5th, 2014 5:45 PM
    Khawill
    How would Germaine react to being threatened verbally? More specifically, by a man who is laughing manically, calling him a girl, and walking out alone?
  6. Retro Bug
    July 23rd, 2014 9:39 PM
    Retro Bug
    Those are great questions, the first one I've answered in my latest OOC post, check it out. Yes, there is a department that deals with things like police in the real world do. It's just called the Department and its officers are called Departers. If anyone did see it, it's nothing they're not used to and would've just reported it to the Department. There doesn't have to be a trigger, no. Magic happens when its called upon, when its needed. Yes, magic can be draining especially for the RPers characters as they've never used magic in their life.
  7. Khawill
    July 22nd, 2014 10:00 PM
    Khawill
    Few more things:
    -How big is the city they are in?
    -Are there police/police stations?
    -Should people be seein what is going on?
    -Is there a trigger (or does there have to be one) for magic? (Anger, love, a word, or concentration?)
    -Is magic physically or mentally draining? (Or is it separate entirely)
  8. Khawill
    July 16th, 2014 3:37 PM
    Khawill
    Ah ok, makes sense.
  9. Retro Bug
    July 16th, 2014 3:28 PM
    Retro Bug
    I'm not saying he can't speak fluently Onzorian, he can, that's okay. Regardless of if he speaks it fluently or not, as a native speaker of a language sometimes you can when someone isn't a native speaker. By the word choices they use, the sentence structure, grammar, etc. Language evolves as well, certain words go out of style and new words come in, phrases, the whole nine yards. Onzor and Kalbion have been at war for ten years so naturally some of the language is going to change.

    Perhaps, "very noticeable" was the wrong words to use but it's going to most likely be detected then reported... Because this is a time of war and people are on are high-alert. If not that then his appearance is most likely going to give it away. I.e If the United States of America is at war with Japan, and some white guy is going around Japan speaking fluent Japanese... Do you think it matters that he's speaking fluent Japanese? They're going to notice his race, mannerisms, clothing.
  10. Khawill
    July 16th, 2014 3:14 PM
    Khawill
    Wouldn't make sense for special forces units to not speak the language of their enemies fluently tbh, at least not in real life. Back when I lived in Bragg (Where army special forces were often stationed) a lot of the guys were required to learn multiple languages, my neighbor had to learn arabic in six months (he wasn't special forces though).
  11. Retro Bug
    July 16th, 2014 3:01 PM
    Retro Bug
    Great question(s), the only thing is that Onzorians don't use paper money anymore, they use the fingerprint, voice command, and/or eye recognition software. Definitely didn't think to mention that. He could definitely explore the city if that's what you want and mug someone for supplies, I guess. Just remember for every action there's a reaction, and that can be a good or bad thing. If you're going to do the explore the city route, please, have that take a whole post or wait until the other RPers have had time to post a first post so they have time to react and the timelines match up.

    It would be awfully suspicious if he didn't speak Onzorian and it would probably be very noticeable that he isn't a native speaker.
  12. Khawill
    July 16th, 2014 2:38 PM
    Khawill
    So what would happen if Check, say, went into the city, mugged someone for money, and then used the money to buy food? Or slightly less extreme, if he explored the city? Would people know he is Kalbionian?

    Furthermore, would he need to speak Onzorian?
  13. Retro Bug
    July 16th, 2014 12:42 AM
    Retro Bug
    I just read your post and I think it's perfectly acceptable, excellent job!

    Ahaha, I was really hoping that someone tell Claire to shut up, I'm glad Check did! Made me smile.
  14. Khawill
    July 15th, 2014 11:27 PM
    Khawill
    Not sure if my post hits all of the requirements, or goes too far
  15. Retro Bug
    July 8th, 2014 8:08 PM
    Retro Bug
    Thanks, for notifying me! I just posted in the thread, check it out! Also, I think everyone only did a paragraph because I did and I was being lazy. Expanding on details is never a bad thing, I'm glad that you put forth the effort!

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