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May 29th, 2013 3:00 AMElaitenstileAnd they take up crime to do this...?
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May 28th, 2013 6:20 AMdeathbymangaof course. i'm not going to ruin their characters by removing the humor.
They are going to be a pair of wealthy kids who's parents and several others, monopolized the water supply of a desert kingdom to fund their rich paradise. After ruining their standing with the people they ruled, anarchy erupted and the entire capital was burned down. Allison(Jessie) and Nicholas(James) survived the destruction by teaming up and rescuing a monster named Burrell who could speak to both humans and monsters. They then wandered the desert trying to find sancuary while trying to find compromise between keeping their identities hidden and preserving their family names. Over time, Allison and Nicholas eventually fall in love and agree to re-vitalize their country's political structure together and return their home to the glory of before their parents. -
May 28th, 2013 5:15 AMElaitenstileOk, but there should be some jokes, alright? I mean, even the most serious movie has a laugh in it. So what's next? Have you planned out the backstory?
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May 28th, 2013 5:09 AMdeathbymangawell, they aren't actually team rocket in that they are a part of a bigger evil group, i'm just talking about Jessie and James an meowth. and like i said, they won't just be comic relief and since this world is a more medieval world with much more dangerous monsters, they aren't nearly as comic relief, but rather, just normal characters.
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May 28th, 2013 3:28 AMElaitenstileWow. That's great news! I'm guessing we can add the personality spice with alleged goons who are repeated in missions. Like a sub-leader who is always present, something like the Team Galactic Commanders, except only one. Also we'll make them do a alleged amount of crime activities, eg. Sport Fixing, Illegal Bribing etc.
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May 27th, 2013 9:11 PMdeathbymangaNot the real team rocket, but new names and much more involved characterization. Not just one note bad guys that were amazingly funny to watch, these guys are going to start out as remakes and move on to be my own design of them.
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May 27th, 2013 9:09 PMdeathbymangai actually had put a hold on the story for a month or so because, well actually, because i forgot about it. I decided in the end it when nobody seemed relatively interested in the story, even passerby's that usually act really interested in my work.
but when i stopped by newgrounds where i had previous went around asking for an animator to help with it, i found it was actually getting a lot of interest, so i went back to the chats that I had been in discussing the plot to this story and I decided to go at it again.
I even figured out who the bandits/goons will be in my story. I actually got inspired when I was talking to another friend of mine and she said that the premise felt like a gritty version of Pokemon, which this story actually started out AS a gritty Pokemon remake, but I figured, hey, if I am going to make a gritty Pokemon remake, I might as well use this as an opportunity to involve my favorite villain team ever, TEAM ROCKET. -
May 26th, 2013 1:07 AMElaitenstileI see. That's no problem, mate. Glad to see you're well too. Well, what's the progress?
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May 25th, 2013 3:06 PMdeathbymangayo man, sorry for being gone for so long. college was really getting to be hard on me
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April 12th, 2013 2:10 AMdeathbymangathe thing is though, is that this isn't were they're introduced. First, they are all bandits or hired goons when they show up. second, they are bad guys when they first show up. third, those traits are incredibly vague and have nothing to do with describing their characters.
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April 12th, 2013 1:40 AMElaitenstileThree of them grow up to become warriors, and one of them become an adventurer who records his journey etc. So, three are like fierce fighters and have command over the military, and one is sort of a politics guy. How's that?
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April 11th, 2013 1:35 PMdeathbymangabeen thinking it over, but I'm having a lot of trouble trying to think up what I'm going to do for these bandits
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April 11th, 2013 3:48 AMElaitenstileDeath, how's the story going?
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April 4th, 2013 5:19 AMElaitenstileYeah, that will be good. I have to go now, until tomorrow, why don't you summarize all this and sort it into a story?
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April 4th, 2013 5:09 AMdeathbymangaok, his beast could be giant worm that burrow though the ground and vides transporation for him as well as can attack by listening to his master play a flute

