I think it seemed to die a little miserably there at the end. Like it was fighting not to die, and then boom... It died, badly.
Thanks. That is my first attempt in a while, so that's reassuring. And yeah, he likes Tedder, but he is still learning to get used to him. Of course, it really doesn't help that Tedder is nervous and scared. I figured I could work better from the "nervous" angle rather than the "confident, cocky, stud" trainer. That is done pretty often, so I wanted to challenge myself more.
I'm just doing a basic post for right now, detailing my arrival in town.
I'm going to arrive in town in my post, go to bed, but before I go to bed I'll make note of noticing a trainer (you) of peculiar interest, before hitting the hay. Sounds really simple, but it pretty much will be. I'm taking baby steps because this is my first roleplay in a while. Nearly two years.