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Conversation Between Belldandy and Nathan

Conversation Between Belldandy and Nathan
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  1. Belldandy
    July 30th, 2014 7:02 PM
  2. Nathan
    July 30th, 2014 6:29 PM
    Will answer tomorrow, dying of sleep rn.
  3. Belldandy
    July 30th, 2014 6:18 PM
    Added to KiK
  4. Belldandy
    March 24th, 2014 5:25 PM
    Yep! Take your time, though, and don't rush. Good writing has patient authors.
  5. Nathan
    March 24th, 2014 5:22 PM
    Thanks a lot. When I'm done rewriting it, can I send it back to you?
  6. Belldandy
    March 24th, 2014 5:19 PM
    I'd suggest using it as framework, and rewriting it to be more in-depth, descriptive, etc. The story is good (asides the mega spoilers and unrealistic reactions of the bad guys); it just needs more detail to make the reader relate to the characters and to get a good vision of scene and the characters themselves.
  7. Nathan
    March 24th, 2014 2:42 PM
    Do you suggest I remake it?
  8. Belldandy
    March 24th, 2014 1:50 PM
    Yep, just VM me if you need any clarification
  9. Nathan
    March 24th, 2014 1:47 PM
    Yes, just finished reading it. Thanks a lot! <3
  10. Belldandy
    March 24th, 2014 1:45 PM
    Did you get the email?
  11. Nathan
    March 24th, 2014 1:44 PM
    Omg, thank you so much for your review!
  12. Belldandy
    March 24th, 2014 1:38 PM
    Heya, I sent back the beta-/proof-read via email. It's really long, but don't get discouraged
  13. Nathan
    July 26th, 2013 8:31 PM
    Working? Then go to sleep, we'll talk later
  14. Belldandy
    July 26th, 2013 8:30 PM
    Good! but about to go to bed lol gotta be up at 9am (8.5h)
  15. Nathan
    July 26th, 2013 8:29 PM
    Fine, what about you?

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