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April 26th, 2014 11:57 AMNidoking76I thought 7582 was to long :)
But seriously, what else can I add to the your role section? -
April 26th, 2014 11:54 AMManaMore expansion pleaseee! We can do it! :) Build on the 'your role' with example scenarios, mention how you're going to have people posting in agreed order.
And, shockingly, I think the rules section is actually too long! :P Cut out the silly/unnecessary ones. -
April 26th, 2014 5:10 AMNidoking76I now have over 7500 characters in my RP, and I have officially run out of ideas :)
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April 25th, 2014 12:54 PMNidoking76Thank you, I should have it up and runnin' by Sunday.
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April 25th, 2014 12:10 PMManaI think before you submit any more threads, you really need to think about your roleplay. There is still a lot to do, like including more detail in the 'Your Role', etc. sections.
You could write it in word, or write PMs to yourself (I often do that) to make sure you're happy with what you have included and how it looks. I don't think it'll be ready for accepted tonight, to be honest. -
April 25th, 2014 11:56 AMNidoking76Thank you, editing it now :)
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April 25th, 2014 11:52 AMManaRightttt. We still need to spread out that new bit, and while we're at it we should use bold and/or underline on the titles to make them stand out.
We also need to flesh out allll the other sections (except professions, that is mostly good) to explain fully what we need. Non-pokemon RPs need a lot more attention! -
April 25th, 2014 11:48 AMNidoking76Aaaaaaand.... I tried again.
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April 25th, 2014 11:41 AMManaYep looks much better! Just make sure to break up the paragraphs with empty lines to separate it out a bit :).
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April 25th, 2014 11:34 AMNidoking76How about this for a finish?
Finally, Korr showed what they were all thinking. He burst out of his chair and banged his fist on the table-a clear sign that he didn't want to do this. The barman looked toward Tarr, and then towards Shiella, for some form of showing that at least they were willing to help him. With a sad look on their faces, Shiella and Tarr shook there heads.
"Sorry," said Tarr.
"We just can't do this," Shiella noted.
With a sigh, the three heroes left the tavern, thusforth dooming the world to it's fate. -
April 25th, 2014 11:24 AMNidoking76I know that.
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April 25th, 2014 11:22 AMManaThat's fine, but as I said I didn't rewrite all of your opening bit ^^ you might want to flesh it out and add more details (eg, describing some of the adventurers mentioned) and beef it up!
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April 25th, 2014 11:20 AMNidoking76Okay two things:
1. For the opening, I just copied and pasted what you wrote. That's okay, right?
2. Instead of 'story' I typed in 'Chapter 1: Temple of the broken dead. That's okay, right? -
April 25th, 2014 11:19 AMManaHaha that's ok :) I didn't do the whole story section though, so try and finish it off yourself ^^.
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April 25th, 2014 11:14 AMNidoking76Thank you, probably gonna copy and paste what you wrote down ;)

