Everyone makes mistakes especially when you're new to things. If you get frustrated with things like this, I suggest you go lurk first in the Roleplay Theater and read up and try practicing writing your characters
I'm just here to point out flaws and help you improve as an RPer. If you're flipping out and getting mad at me when I just pointed out where you're wrong and what you can do to make it right, I don't think RPT is your place to be, IMO.