Sorry, I saw you went off so I didn't bother messaging you again.
I enjoyed it a lot. It seemed to have a lot of unique features which are good.(The prayers, the way you wrote the outer body sequence) I enjoy the way you right as well. The killing sequence was brutal. Like GP said, I'm curious to see where you take him. That's my feedback, I'm gonna finish my post before I leave for college
As for the name thing I get that a lot
S-Y-D-O-X-A-R-O...Its pretty much said how its spelt
You can just call me Sydan for short (Yes like my character in Hoenn)