How about this for a suggestion, DON'T GET SO DAMN GOOD WITHOUT EVEN TRYING YO'! >:O
Seriously though, this is damn sexy... The kind of style I am trying to get back into but can't... If anything, make the text letters bit closer together, then make that soft brush little less opacity and maybe make those blacks in the bottom corners a bit less black. Could even sharpen her face a tiny bit.
But yeah, all just little thing in adjustments. 'Tis the sexy.
Ahhh, I so wish I could start updating my gallery again but Im stuck in this hotel on vacation with this awful netbook and bad internet. I'll be home by monday though and I'll be making stuff for sure.